Wednesday, March 18, 2020

Love vs. Enmity

Love vs. Enmity Two lovers, trying to break the enmity between their families with their forbidden love, in the streets of Verona, Italy; is the main conflict of the world's most famous play Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare. The two families, the Capulet's and the Montague's, struggle for power in Verona. Romeo, the son of Lord Montague, and Juliet, the daughter of Lord Capulet, fall in love. Romeo and Juliet love can not exist for a long period of time because their love is not as powerful as the hate between the families, which brings Romeo's and Juliet's love to an end. Tragically, love is often not strong enough to overcome enmity.Prejudice and pride caused by enmity weaken love. Most of the Capulet's maintain preconceptions about the Montague's, as much as the Montague's maintain about Capulet's. "This, by his voice, should be a Montague. / Fetch me my rapier, boy.Romeo and Juliet, Act I-Scene_3. Lady Capulet and .../ .../ To strike him dead I hold it not a sin." (I.5.53-58) Tybalt, cous in of Juliet, is biased against Romeo. Romeo enters Capulet's party and his appearance is unacceptable for the Capulet's. Romeo doesn't cause any trouble at the party in front of the Capulet's vision; however, he kisses Juliet but luckily no one realizes. Tybalt acts as if Romeo creates a chaos. Thus, Tybalt is being biased on Romeo. It's also very obvious from Tybalt's words that he does not consider to kill a Montague, a sin. It is nearly impossible for love to remain the same and not lose its power, when there are too many conflicts. The contrast between the prejudice and Juliet's feelings about Romeo weakens love. Hence, enmity can cause pride and prejudice to ruin love.The loss of one's self-control can lead to the destruction of love. The decisions that Romeo makes without...

Sunday, March 1, 2020

How to Start a Story My Simple Guide as a Bestselling Novelist

How to Start a Story My Simple Guide as a Bestselling Novelist How to Start a Story: Writing a Great Opening Line for Your Novel or Nonfiction Book Some say editors and agents can decide against your manuscript within the first three pages. Harsh as that sounds, the truth is worse They can actually pass judgment within the first few paragraphs. If they arent hooked immediately, they move on. That doesn’t sound fair, but we writers must face reality. Except for loved ones and close friends, readers aren’t much more merciful. So even if you’re self-publishing and avoiding the harsh glare of professional eyes, rivet your readers from the get-go or most will close your book without a second thought. There’s no formula for the perfect opener, but great writers have been creating them for centuries. The key, as with every other writing question, is to think reader-first and do what you believe will work best. Novelist Les Edgerton began a short story this way: He was so mean that wherever he was standing became the bad part of town. I’d keep reading, wouldn’t you? You’ll find some favorites below in four categories. Play off these and see what you can come up with for your work in progress. Need help writing your novel?Click here to download my ultimate 12-step guide. How to Start a Story: 4 Types of Opening Lines 1. Surprise Fiction Many years later, as he faced the firing squad, Colonel Aureliano Buendà ­a was to remember that distant afternoon when his father took him to discover ice. - Gabriel Garcia Marquez,One Hundred Years of Solitude (1967) It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. - George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949) It was a wrong number that started it, the telephone ringing three times in the dead of night, and the voice on the other end asking for someone he was not. - Paul Auster, City of Glass (1985) It was the day my grandmother exploded. - Iain M. Banks, The Crow Road (1992) High, high above the North Pole, on the first day of 1969, two professors of English Literature approached each other at a combined velocity of 1200 miles per hour. - David Lodge, Changing Places (1975) Nonfiction By the time Eustace Conway was seven years old, he could throw a knife accurately enough to nail a chipmunk to a tree. - Elizabeth Gilbert, The Last American Man (2002) Every year I bury a couple hundred of my townspeople. - Thomas Lynch, Undertaking: Life Studies From the Dismal Trade (1997) In the fall of 1993, a man who would upend much of what we know about habits walked into a laboratory in San Diego for a scheduled appointment. - Charles Duhigg, The Power of Habit (2012) 2. Dramatic Statement Fiction Lolita, light of my life, fire of my loins. - Vladimir Nabokov, Lolita (1955) I am an invisible man. - Ralph Ellison, Invisible Man (1952) He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Gulf Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish. - Ernest Hemingway, The Old Man and the Sea (1952) Someone must have slandered Josef K., for one morning, without having done anything trulywrong, he was arrested. - Franz Kafka, The Trial (1925) They shoot the white girl first. - Toni Morrison, Paradise (1998) You better not never tell nobody but God. - Alice Walker, The Color Purple (1982) Nonfiction My sharpest memory is of a single instant surrounded by dark. - Mary Karr, The Liars Club (1995) What are you looking at me for? Im not here to stay†¦ - Maya Angelou, I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings (1969) I was five years old the first time I ever set foot in prison. - Jimmy Santiago Baca, A Place to Stand (2001) Beware thoughts that come in the night. - William Least Heat Moon, Blue Highways (1982) My high school friends have begun to suspect I haven’t told them the full story of my life. - Ishmael Beah, A Long Way Gone: Memoirs of a Boy Soldier (2007) 3. Philosophical Fiction Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way. - Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina (1877) This is the saddest story I have ever heard. - Ford Madox Ford, The Good Soldier (1915) Nonfiction It’s not about you. - Rick Warren, Purpose Driven Life (2002) No comet blazed when I was born. - Denis Healey, The Time of My Life (1989) 4. Poetic Fiction When I finally caught up with Abraham Trahearne, he was drinking beer with an alcoholic bulldog named Fireball Roberts in a ramshackle joint just outside of Sonoma, California, drinking the heart right out of a fine spring afternoon. - James Crumley, The Last Good Kiss (1978) It was just noon that Sunday morning when the sheriff reached the jail with Lucas Beauchamp though the whole town (the whole county too for that matter) had known since the night before that Lucas had killed a white man. - William Faulkner, Intruder in the Dust (1948) Nonfiction The village of Holcomb stands on the high wheat plains of western Kansas, a lonesome area that other Kansans call â€Å"out there.† - Truman Capote, In Cold Blood (1967) When people ask- and seems like people always be askin to where I can’t never get away from it- I say, Yeah, that’s right, my mother name was Henrietta Lacks, she died in 1951, John Hopkins took her cells and them cells are still livin today, still multiplyin, still growin and spreadin if you don’t keep em frozen. - Rebecca Skloot, The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks (2010) Need help writing your novel?Click here to download my ultimate 12-step guide. Writing A Great Opening Line Is Only the Beginning Then it’s your job to keep the reader with you. So study storytelling, work at creating compelling characters, and become a ferocious self-editor. You just might produce a manuscript that keeps an editor or agent reading all the way through. What are some of your favorite opening lines? Tell me in the comments.